this state of affairs is incorrect
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unblinkeredBrenda's is closed. Brenda's is never closed. Not during its usual hours, not at 5am. Except on national holidays, or during severe weather, neither of which is present today. There's no notice on the door, just the Open sign flipped around to Closed. This state of affairs is incorrect.
There was no indication that the coffee shop was in financial trouble. Max knew as much from eavesdropping on the teens working in the back. The manager didn't come out much, but she never seemed alarmed or upset- always a little smug, if anything. Max wasn't sure if her name was Brenda, or if that was just the chain- she was always Ma'am to the staff. Her employees-only room down the hall, near the bathrooms- usually dead quiet. All day long, at least when Max was there. Enough activity- footsteps, occasional laughter- to tell she was there, but nothing that indicated any trouble for the store.
An emergency, then. She'd been called away on some urgent business, and... told the kids not to come into work? It wasn't as if she did much managing- could she not trust her staff to do their job unsupervised, despite more or less doing so day in and day out? And...
And no, she couldn't have gone somewhere. Her car, that Volkswagen beetle was there. It was definitely hers, she left to go get lunch every day at 1:00. No other cars parked nearby, that he could see. So, unless she'd gone on foot to something extremely urgent, she was still in the building.
Max knocks. There's no answer.
Max goes around behind the building and takes the key from under the dumpster, where a less than cautious morning-shift barista had been fool enough to retrieve it while someone like Max could have been watching. He opens the door and goes inside, because they don't have cameras and he's a regular- they wouldn't charge him with breaking and entering, he's sure, even if they did find out.
People who aren't Max might have shrugged and gone to a different coffee shop. People who are Max are instead inclined to find out what it is that disturbed their nice, orderly little universe and demand it account for itself.
It's dark and no one is there. Max looks around for anything out of place, and finds that there is exactly one thing out of place. The manager's door is open. This is considerably more unusual than the related fact, which is that the manager isn't there. Max has seen how careful she is to lock that door before going anywhere.
He goes inside. Privacy is not something Max has a lot of regard for- more something he resents, to some extent. And the room is clearly the sort of thing someone might want to keep private.
There are bookshelves, and there is a desk, and there are chalkboards, and they are all covered in paper. As is the floor. The paper is covered in smears. Some huge collection of notes, or documents, or something, all smudged into illegibility. Written in pencil, erased by a particularly smeary eraser. Most of the shapes of the smears suggest diagrams and math more than they do writing. Max inspects all of it, searching for clues. Nothing is legible, except for a few notes posted by the door.
The other door. Not the one leading in. A door with scorch marks and dents. A door set into the wall, where according to the geometry of the building, it ought to open into the alleyway, despite no such door being present. The legible notes, written in ink and taped to the wall, read "I HAVE TO GO", "DO NOT OPEN" and "SOMEONE PLEASE BLOCK THIS OFF" and "DON'T LET HER IN" and "YOUR NAME IS PRECIOUS", scribbled in hasty capital letters.
Max wonders what is behind the door. He's unnerved somewhat by the surrounding evidence of the manager having some sort of psychotic break, but his thoughts have not had sufficient time to settle into questions before opening the door. He is still in the information-gathering stage, and there can clearly be nothing behind the door but additional information to gather. The question of whether to open the mysterious door in the mysterious place fails to even cross his mind.
He steps into a dark room.
Which abruptly stops being a dark room, and starts being a brightly-lit forest. Max's hand, halfway through reaching for the light switch, falls to his side.
There was no indication that the coffee shop was in financial trouble. Max knew as much from eavesdropping on the teens working in the back. The manager didn't come out much, but she never seemed alarmed or upset- always a little smug, if anything. Max wasn't sure if her name was Brenda, or if that was just the chain- she was always Ma'am to the staff. Her employees-only room down the hall, near the bathrooms- usually dead quiet. All day long, at least when Max was there. Enough activity- footsteps, occasional laughter- to tell she was there, but nothing that indicated any trouble for the store.
An emergency, then. She'd been called away on some urgent business, and... told the kids not to come into work? It wasn't as if she did much managing- could she not trust her staff to do their job unsupervised, despite more or less doing so day in and day out? And...
And no, she couldn't have gone somewhere. Her car, that Volkswagen beetle was there. It was definitely hers, she left to go get lunch every day at 1:00. No other cars parked nearby, that he could see. So, unless she'd gone on foot to something extremely urgent, she was still in the building.
Max knocks. There's no answer.
Max goes around behind the building and takes the key from under the dumpster, where a less than cautious morning-shift barista had been fool enough to retrieve it while someone like Max could have been watching. He opens the door and goes inside, because they don't have cameras and he's a regular- they wouldn't charge him with breaking and entering, he's sure, even if they did find out.
People who aren't Max might have shrugged and gone to a different coffee shop. People who are Max are instead inclined to find out what it is that disturbed their nice, orderly little universe and demand it account for itself.
It's dark and no one is there. Max looks around for anything out of place, and finds that there is exactly one thing out of place. The manager's door is open. This is considerably more unusual than the related fact, which is that the manager isn't there. Max has seen how careful she is to lock that door before going anywhere.
He goes inside. Privacy is not something Max has a lot of regard for- more something he resents, to some extent. And the room is clearly the sort of thing someone might want to keep private.
There are bookshelves, and there is a desk, and there are chalkboards, and they are all covered in paper. As is the floor. The paper is covered in smears. Some huge collection of notes, or documents, or something, all smudged into illegibility. Written in pencil, erased by a particularly smeary eraser. Most of the shapes of the smears suggest diagrams and math more than they do writing. Max inspects all of it, searching for clues. Nothing is legible, except for a few notes posted by the door.
The other door. Not the one leading in. A door with scorch marks and dents. A door set into the wall, where according to the geometry of the building, it ought to open into the alleyway, despite no such door being present. The legible notes, written in ink and taped to the wall, read "I HAVE TO GO", "DO NOT OPEN" and "SOMEONE PLEASE BLOCK THIS OFF" and "DON'T LET HER IN" and "YOUR NAME IS PRECIOUS", scribbled in hasty capital letters.
Max wonders what is behind the door. He's unnerved somewhat by the surrounding evidence of the manager having some sort of psychotic break, but his thoughts have not had sufficient time to settle into questions before opening the door. He is still in the information-gathering stage, and there can clearly be nothing behind the door but additional information to gather. The question of whether to open the mysterious door in the mysterious place fails to even cross his mind.
He steps into a dark room.
Which abruptly stops being a dark room, and starts being a brightly-lit forest. Max's hand, halfway through reaching for the light switch, falls to his side.
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Date: 2014-09-03 01:43 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2014-09-03 01:52 am (UTC)He ties one of his socks around his head. They're clean enough, he put them on this morning. That's how hygiene works. Definitely.
"Healing spell. Also very complicated, specialized magic. I'm... going to need to understand the fundamentals of this before I can decide what sorts of things ought to be surprising, now."
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Date: 2014-09-03 02:00 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2014-09-03 02:16 am (UTC)He's not sure if it's the head injury diminishing his willingness to press the issue, or hunger. He stops talking, walking along in silence. Questions can wait for when his head isn't swimming anymore. It appears it didn't get the memo about the rest of the body being done with that.
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Date: 2014-09-03 02:18 am (UTC)"I'm afraid you'll be cramped, although you should be able to fit," she says, opening the door for him.
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Date: 2014-09-03 02:28 am (UTC)He locates seating and slumps. "Walking. Back home I don't have to do that so much."
Back home he also didn't ford rivers or acquire head injuries, but those things weren't strictly typicaly parts of getting around in this place.
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Date: 2014-09-03 02:30 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2014-09-03 02:36 am (UTC)"Uh. I don't... think I swallowed any river water, but it definitely got in my mouth. Is that... something to worry about? What's the threshold there?"
He doesn't see any cups- he supposes he's supposed to drink from the pitcher. He lifts it to his mouth, and...
And if she were lying about water being safe, and not wanting to make him her vassal? Not eating, not giving his name, those were in his control. If she were to enslave him, this is how she would do it.
He hesitates. Waits on the answer to the river question.
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Date: 2014-09-03 02:37 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2014-09-03 02:40 am (UTC)"I don't think I swallowed any mouthfuls, no- although I could have missed doing so when I was dazed- but I did ordinary swallowing, and some of that- you said, detritus- could have lingered in my mouth. If you don't know the rules there, I don't suppose it matters."
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Date: 2014-09-03 02:43 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2014-09-03 02:46 am (UTC)Max rinses and spits. He refills the wooden cup. He still doesn't drink.
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Date: 2014-09-03 02:48 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2014-09-03 11:04 pm (UTC)He looks apprehensively at the cup.
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Date: 2014-09-03 11:07 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2014-09-03 11:29 pm (UTC)He sets the water down on the table. This is too much.
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Date: 2014-09-03 11:32 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2014-09-03 11:49 pm (UTC)But...
"These scribes- mortals aren't that uncommon, are they? In my world, we have... these machines that let you copy and print off lots of pages quickly, which would probably speed up that kind of thing like wow. Do they have some kind of magic that's more efficient than mortal technology? Or is there some other reason they don't swipe office printers from our world?"
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Date: 2014-09-03 11:51 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2014-09-03 11:58 pm (UTC)"...and how often is "not very often", exactly?"
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Date: 2014-09-04 12:01 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2014-09-04 12:21 am (UTC)He drains the cup while looking her straight in the eyes.
"...Well?"
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Date: 2014-09-04 12:23 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2014-09-04 12:30 am (UTC)Well, never mind. Not reacting is more or less confirmation that pure water is safe.
"So... what's the first step to getting a gate home? If I understand you right, the clock is ticking, with the- with the starvation."
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Date: 2014-09-04 12:32 am (UTC)(no subject)
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